Wednesday, September 19, 2007

Crosscountry Hurts--A Haiku

Crosscountry Hurts
my feet are running
my lungs are aching for air
the Texan sun burns
--by me


ps. I promise I will review b1000 soon!!!

6 comments:

Erin said...

That's really great, Sookie. :)

Anidori-Isilee said...

I love it. Haikus are so much fun. :D

Polka Dotted Pickles said...

I love running! :)

Edge said...

I run XC too, in south Texas, so I sympathize. It's hot, it's humid, and after long enough, I hurt!

Sookie said...

Thank you everyone. (Anidori isilee: I love haikus too!)

Edge: That's awesome. The Texan heat can be so brutal :-( But even though it hurts I (*grumbles*) enjoy it immensly.

Bohae said...

Whoa, nice haiku :)